Friday, June 15, 2018

My Pepeha - By Jack


2 comments:

  1. Kia ora Jack,
    You have embedded an engaging pepeha. I'm not sure about The bush as your people - what does this mean?
    Remember to add a title to your blog post.
    Mrs Krausse

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    1. Hello Mrs Krausse
      Thank you for the feedback, I don't intend on changing the Bush as my people because I believe a Bush represents me and my family.
      I have added a title, thanks for that.

      -Jack

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