Tuesday, October 23, 2018

Summer - By Jack


  1. I'm pretty happy with how this came out. I'm not sure I'd change anything about this piece, but I might change my mind. I'm quite proud of the layout I used, I think it looks very clean and polished, but others may think differently than me.


  2. I like how you have more than 6 lines of writing because the minimum is 6 lines.
    I also like how you have a background.
    Next time I think you could of made sure you have full stops where you need them.


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